User:Jmfullerton

Erin Gollie pd. 1 team 1D Review of Cruel and Unusual punisment

 In this article, I think that the author followed many of the guidelines well. In the history he/she did not use any of their own personal opinions; they just stated the facts. In the beggining of this section however, they kept saying that people were killed harshly and even though others may say that, the author did not state who said it. This leaves the readers to believe that the author feels the same way, and you should not put your opinions in your own writing. Overall this author did a very good job of not including his/her opinion in this article.